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RE: Writing competition - Competition Closed - winner announced shortly

in #writing7 years ago

He stood up and looked out of the window... Why did he insist on stopping at that bar ?... he thought to himself as he turned and gazed upon her as she lay sleeping on the bed ... She was beautiful and she was his type ....but who the hell is she?.... what had he done? ...the whole night was a total blur... and why was he wearing a wedding ring?...

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Like it, nice twist :-)