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RE: Pounded by Ezra: trite, cliche, and boring; aiming at the object.

in #writing6 years ago

A lot of he “Keats ....” poem is referencing dead authors of poetry. Laced through are graphic sexual images that, according to the author are attempting to describe Carpe diem.

My favorite are the unexpected Combinations of socks and how they’re related.

I like your description of how the hand moves slowly throughout your body until it becomes more sensitive I really enjoyed that combinations of sex and how they’re related.

I like your description of how the hand move slowly throughout your body until it becomes more sensitive I really enjoyed that. Part of your comment.

The red wheelbarrow poem is extremely minimalist. It is literally the definition of minimal portrait. It is an excellent example of pure images, and nothing more. The whole poem relies on the first line, “so much depends upon”.

You described it perfectly, actually, it was exactly like watching a PowerPoint image. It is exactly like watching an old movie but it’s just a bunch of pictures. That is the entire time, and meeting is going through the users observation of those pictures.

As always, thank you for your insightful comment and trust. Know that I do not recommend things lightly.