Really enjoyed this. Sucked me right in from the start.
a brawl so large it emptied onto the streets like a flash flood after the levy breaks.
Made my jaw drop, the wording was so perfect!
Fists flying and knees poking good fun
Made me laugh out loud.
And I really loved the mix of rhyme and prose, overall! Keep it up!
Wow. Thank you for the feedback. That means a lot. I will continue down this path and see where it leads.
Sweet! Looking forward to see what you discover!