My pleasure. It's a great idea to use this conversation with the bird as a means to show how lonely this person is. It's much more effective in making the reader commiserate with the character than a direct author's narrative. A thumb up!
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Thanks! As a little Easter egg of sorts, Charlotte Perkins (the bird) is named after Charlotte Perkins Gilman, who wrote 'The Yellow Wallpaper', another story about a solitary woman of questionable sanity.
I followed you and now will read your other texts. Cheers!