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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 9

in #writing8 years ago (edited)

Thank you. It annoys me too.

Today's story has had to be a little less action because no story can be all action - otherwise the characters wouldn't have a chance to endear themselves to the readers.

Thank you for your observation. Better luck for tomorrow :)

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It’s the dialog that gives you that bond with the characters- so when the action happens, you are rooting for them. Oh and my name is Zach by the way :)

LET ME JUST SAY:

YOU HEAR THAT PEOPLE-

DONT COMMENT UNTIL YOU READ THE POST- RESPECT THE EFFORT THE WRITTER PUTS INTO THEIR WORK!

Love,

@theessential