Continuing with the novel in which I work (La vida de Miriam) second part.

in #writing7 years ago

Hello friends of steemit, today I bring you the continuation of the novel in which I currently work. I hope you like it and I will be glad to bring you the continuation of it.

chapter 1 continuation

Miriam did not mind living alone, that was her choice since her mother died when she was sixteen years old, for that time they wanted to leave her in charge of her only maternal aunt but she knew it would be hell to live with that crazy obsessive the birds, just thinking about the smell of that old woman's house caused nausea, taking her with her father was not an option since the man fled when he found out that his mother was pregnant with her, always thought that for him she was a tiny demon that would come to ruin his happiness.

The day of his abduction, it was like any other except for the stupid clock that did not want to sound the alarm, causing it to wake up thirty minutes late. He got up as quickly as he could, dressed and ate, by the time he got to the bus stop it was too late, the next one would arrive in an hour, he had to think of something quick.

It would be a coincidence or the GPS would be damaged, it was less strange to see a dog walking to its owner than to see that rich child, beautiful and hateful face, even stranger was that he stopped his car to say hello and worse to offer to take her to work, she had always thought that her boss was a slob and more to her, but since she was going to be late she decided to accept that he would take her.

The tension in the car was so great that she could not stand it until Ian started talking to her.

  • You know Miriam, do not wait to see yourself in that place what were you doing there?
  • Mmmm I do not know Ian I think I went crazy to be there, or I would be there because I live in the neighborhood.
  • Seriously, I did not expect it, why do not you try to find a better sector to live?
  • You know, Ian, we are not all lucky to be born in a wealthy family, or to have a salary like yours, some of us have to wrap ourselves up to where the sheets reach us, in my case as far as the money goes.

Between the exchange of words with her boss Ian, she heard a voice coming from the back of the car, it was the voice of a man she had not noticed when she got in the car. Suddenly she began to hear other voices, many voices in the car, Ian asked what was happening to her, she felt that she was going crazy, then she began to feel her body heavier and heavier until she was so heavy that just keeping her eyes open ones meant a great effort, while she thought that if something happened to her, who could worry about helping her ?, who would notice her absence ?, there were many questions and concerns that crossed her mind at that moment, believing that she would be cruelly tortured first of being murdered, in the midst of all that she fell in a faint and could no longer bear all the heaviness.

Here I will leave the link for the first part:

https://steemit.com/writing/@miralva/i-bring-you-a-fragment-of-the-novel-in-which-i-work-miriam-s-life

I hope you liked it later I will continue to bring you more of this story, thank you very much for your support and attention.

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