@tamala, first off.. congratulations on your first piece of fiction!! You did great and I'm so very proud of you for giving it a try. I love your story, and can relate with all of it. The first time my son was in the hospital they took him to another room, and didn't let me go, to put his IV in. Being that 'lioness' protecting her cub.. yeah... totally relate. Secondly, I was intrigued... I hope that you will continue this story. I want to know what will happen. You've succeeded in captivating your audience. Finally, and this one won't be so technical... yay!!!! I'm so glad you decided to write some fiction. It's really awesome to get trapped in your head to explore your characters and settings and making decisions about these lives that you have complete control over. I hope that didn't sound insane but how else do I describe it?? Lol.. Nice job in jumping in feet first... I can't wait to see more!! And it's very humbling to be a little part of the inspiration that got you to this point. You have talent babe... you need to show that off more!!! .gif)
You're too sweet! Without the inspiration of your work, I certainly wouldn't have even attempted this!
XXXOOO ~T