That is some great advise and thank you for your kind words. I will edit it right now :) feel free to give me any other creative critique. i love to improve my writing. :)
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That is some great advise and thank you for your kind words. I will edit it right now :) feel free to give me any other creative critique. i love to improve my writing. :)
Well. There is a discord server full of writers dedicated to helping each other. ;-) Some of my posts refer to that magical place.
that sounds awesome :) could you post me a link to it here, i'm not sure in which of your posts it is. thank you
I'm on my phone so it's a bit awkward. But I believe the one on writing in a second language has a link at the bottom. ;-)
awesome, i found it. thank you very much for the link. Also thank you for the editing advise. i split it into three text segments and also made a "change line" in the middle of the second. Looks a lot better already :)