What a beautiful ending, @johnjgeddes! I loved that last paragraph. Poetry haunts you, it's your mark. Many times I have heard these stories and sometimes I have thought how true they can be: we have twin souls who are somewhere waiting for us? If we do not find it in this life, will God give us another chance to meet in other lives? It would be genuinely romantic to find ourselves (literally) in someone's eyes and know that from so much walking, we have finally found the warm place to arrive, where to stay. To know that no matter how many turns you have taken, like a puzzle, your head fits perfectly on her shoulder and vice versa. Nice Thursday!
Thank you, Nancy - it is so rewarding when your reader understands :)