A wild delight surges through me. I can sense Jessica near. She’s on the grounds with me and the darkness provides just enough obscurity to soften the stark actuality of the everyday and liberate her spirit.
Great expressionistic work. I get a real sense of your character and the small details into his past you offer illuminate a lot what is going on in his mind that he may not be aware of.
Thanks, Pryde - I like the participant narrator mode