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What exactly are you pitching and what do you do? I'm interested because it is not everyday you see someone pitching something other than a baseball or product, let alone a script.

i don't know if you saw the intro post that thestamos made but i'm on of the brothers he was talking about. we have a production company we are getting going. the script is part of a pitch for a show idea with our first big potential client.

No kidding!? good for you guys. I use to work in Film and Television coming out of college for a decade before I got married. Did almost everything behind the camera except makeup and special FX like explosives. The most important thing when it comes to your writing is having a small group of people as sounding boards that are dead HONEST. yes men will get you nowhere. Good luck with your pitch.Keep it snappy and know it inside and out.

I'm looking forward to hearing where this is going

Be confident, not cocky. Youre doing them a favor. You thought of them while writing this. It would be a shame to work with anyone else but if the deal isnt right, on to the next one.

thanks, dude. that's solid advice. did thestamos mention who this script is for?

Sounds interesting. When will you put it out

sounds like a dumb idea

Then 5 people get up and walk out of the room. Either 1 at a time or together as a unit.