I liked the outline and the first chapter.
You mentioned collaborators should use a special tag for the next chapter they post? (I'll have the next chapter finished a bit later.)
By the way: ``Howard Harold moved to the window . . . '' ?
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#costeem and thanks, I was calling him Peter for a bit too, thought I'd gotten it all, that's the hassle with not writing in word, find/replace is not a thing