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RE: Bouncer re-write part 2

in #writing7 years ago


I want to know what made that guy to be depressed, causing to be so drunk.@michelle.gent, I can't wait for the next part which is part three..

And I like what that lady did to him, by slapping him. If we have more ladies like that in the world, then men won't be committing crime and going scout free...

And the women who showed in proved the benefit of woman power (ladies sticking together).

Would be posting my first chapter of my fiction Story tomorrow, and you are specially invited for a read..
Thanks

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The guy became depressed when his friends left and he stayed to drink alone.

I can see .....
You leave me with more questions like,
Why did his friends left him, what did he do and so on....



Your review would be highly appreciated.
ThanksMain while @michelle.gent have finally posted the story have been anticipating about, here's it https://steemit.com/fiction/@uche-nna/fiction-alexander-s-child-chapter1