wow the story was great! and the the most line that makes me smile is this :
Look, love,” Zack said in a kindlier tone. “Take this as a lesson learned and don’t bring that kind of money out with you again. Unless, of course, you’re taking me out with it?”
haha! I know it was a joke, but it was already put on my mind that I was the girl in the story. it makes me imagine that I was on the story, portraying the lady.. I felt every lines!
thanks for sharing, I would love to read the continuation of the story :-)
I am enjoying your story.