This post was also written in Portuguese: “É o fim”.
English
I feel the end has arrived.
Sadness is all I have and with it I will die.
The time has come, time to leave.
In these complicated moments I only think about bad things.
Artillery of sad thoughts.
Everything I have not accomplished and should have done.
So many mistakes, few successes, criticisms.
The times I said no, I should have said yes.
I get emotional and feel the return, how many wrong decisions?
This isn't hell, it's winter.
There is no fire but water, ice, ice, reverse.
I was never what I wanted to be and now I just feel cold.
Drowning in this immensity, my heavy body.
Sinking with no return, it's gone, so what is it?
Doubts in life we all have.
Now I don't have time anymore.
It's the end, it's the end, how much despair.
This time there is no happy ending.
My advice? Accomplish, Smile, Love, Live!
Before it's too late.
So wet and so cold…
Now really…
It's the end.
Português
Sinto que o final chegou.
Tristeza é tudo que tenho e com ela morrerei.
Chegou o momento, hora de ir embora.
Nesses momentos complicados só penso em coisa ruim.
Artilharia de pensamentos tristes.
Tudo o que não realizei e deveria ter feito.
Tantos erros, poucos acertos, críticas.
Às vezes em que falei não, deveria ter dito o sim.
Emociono-me e sinto o regresso, quantas decisões erradas?
Isso aqui não é o inferno, é o inverno.
Não tem fogo e sim água, gelada, gelo, reverso.
Nunca fui o que queria ser e agora, só sinto frio.
Me afogando nessa imensidão, meu corpo pesado.
Afundando sem volta, já era, assim que é?
Dúvidas da vida todos nós temos.
Agora não tenho mais tempo.
É o fim, é o fim, quanto desespero.
Dessa vez não tem final feliz.
Meu conselho? Realize, sorria, ame, viva!
Antes que seja tarde demais.
Tão molhado e tão frio…
Agora realmente…
É o fim.
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I couldn't quite decide from my perspective whether this poem was dealing with a suicide, depression or a drowning, both literal and figurative. I do know that I felt the pain and anguish and regret. I would love to hear more about your thoughts behind writing this. It was quite emotive. Thank you for sharing.
Hello Goodnight! I am very happy with your interaction!
Today I had a very difficult day, I had a small discussion with a person I love a lot and with that I got a lot of ideas in my head, it inspired me to write this text, which is a way of portraying it, when I get really sad, it starts a lot of negative and bad ideas came to my mind. The feeling I have is like I'm drowning in these ideas, because I know we have to be calm to resolve conflicts. So being pulled under and with no chance of getting out or emerging, I'm thinking, what could I do differently? What could I accomplish that I haven't accomplished yet? Getting upset with someone what if something happens tomorrow? Well, that's more or less what I wanted to convey 😁
Oi amigo, espero que você esteja bem. Queria ter comentado antes mas estava sem RC.
Gostei que no final você sabe o que precisa:
Sei bem como pensamentos negativos podem nos transbordar e parece que quanto mais pensamos pior fica
As vezes erramos as vezes acertamos
Conversa com ela com calma e quando estiver com esse sentimento procure mudar o foco, as vezes ajuda comigo pra sair do vortex
É difícil mas não é impossível
Gostei da ideia do @quillfire vou até usar também como tema
Amanhã será um melhor dia 🙏
Vou contar os dias para ler seu próximo poema. Hehehe 😊😁
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Oieee! Sempre uma honra receber seus comentários! Fico muito agradecido pelo teu suporte e seus elogios. Estou ansioso para ler os seus poemas também 😁!
É uma alegria imensa ver que os meus poemas tocam as pessoas e como sempre digo, você é uma inspiração. Muito obrigado!
I understand now, I can see the connections, thank you. I wish you all the very best🙏and look forward to reading more of your work and thoughts :-)
Hello how are you? I am very happy for your support and words, it is very rewarding to see that you liked my work! I will strive more and more to always deliver a quality post! Thank you very much! 🙏😍
That line makes the whole poem, for me. Suffering is hell, and death is the end of suffering. I also love that the speaker is still asking what life is at the end: 'now it's gone, what is it?' And I guess though the speaker is in despair, there is a note of hope in the poem, because they find the answer in the end: Life is smiling, love, and it just is life. ... Thanks for sharing in the Creative Coin Discord.
This poem was one of the most sentimental ones I've ever written, yesterday I had a complicated day and I was sad about it, so I imagined a lot of things, like drowning in bad and sad ideas, that sometimes hell isn't even fire, it's water where we drown in negative thoughts and that also at the end of life or a story, we usually have a quick glimpse of what we could have done differently or how we could have lived differently. Thank you so much for the support! 🙏
Dark, but well constructed ... even in translation. 👍
As a fellow poet, might I suggest the theme of your next poem ... a poem about gratitude.
I often think we poets spend too much time in the doldrums and, as it turns out, one cannot be thankful and depressed at the same time.
Quill
Hello, how is everything? Glad you liked my text, I believe it was one of the most sentimental ones I've written. I'll write down your suggestion to talk about gratitude and I hope I can deliver it by the end of the week. Thank you so much for the support! 🙏
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Thank you so much for the support! 👊