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RE: World Building - Designs for a Sci-fi story

in #art7 years ago

Nice looking!

Where does the hero come from, what is his motivation? How happy are the people with the structure?

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Thanks for the questions.
Makes me explore the theme a little more.

Sureev comes from what he calls "The outside". He talks to the workers about desertic landscapes with gravity fluctuating. These lands are filled with thieves and beasts. Surieev claims that surviving there is not that hard once you get used to it and control your surroundings.

People from the structure don't really question their happiness until Sureev comes around. They do fear "The outside" but realise their lives could be so much more!

The hero's motives seem pure, making people aware of how life could be better.
It does turn obsessive and leads to a revolution and quest to destroy the Command.