the continuing story of the land of younow part 4 , sorry for any repetition

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After Noble and hopnotic enjoy drink and conversation
with his fellow trapped travelers in this world of younow.
He and Hopnotic carried on along the shore line.
They discovered a gigantic cave, Noble smiled towards
hoptnoic and said. Hoppy shall we investigate. They entered
the dim lit cavern, They noticed a trail of blueberry's
along the caves path. Hoppy said Noble I know that is
rachellovinglifes blueberry that she picked with her
family the other day. Lets us investigate further and
hope she has not come to any harm. Aww i thought
i just so her hopp and saw a a big blue puff of smoke
before she dissapered. Noble investigated the area
where she has dissapered. A mans aftershave(probaly
her husbands) a dog bone(most likely her trusty dog
diliala) and bits of cherrios(oh no her baby daughter
Angela) who had all dissappred in a puff of smoke.
I don't know what happened Hoppy, I have heard of
strange creatures kidnapping fellow younow
travelers i hope Rachel and her family are okay.
But let us make sure our Armour is good and secure.
Noble adjusted his helmet his shield his sword(one
that actually shot out destructive lightning bolts
against enemy's) He adjusted Hoppys, Armour as
well , what a site to see a Kangaroo dressed in customized
horse Armour but for a kangaroo. I think our enemy's
will die from laughter just seeing you Hoppy. Hopnotic
let out a small but loving and annoying grunt.
With that they continued deeper inside the cave.
They had gone deeper and deeper in the cave
without incident as yet . So far so good Hoppy
said Noble, No trolls, No evil travelers as of yet.

Curious. Noble did like it when things were so
quiet. They then marveled at what they saw next.
A gigantic waterfall 13 story's high, that poured into
a Huge and clear to the bottom lake. What a site to
see , especially inside a cave. Well Hoppy time
to set up camp and rest , With that Noble went
to make coffee on the fire , While Hopnotic stood guard
ignoring any passerby's for the moment. Noble
returned after making coffee with the beans he
had acquired earlier from the Kangaroo house.
When he saw Rachelovinglife and her family
dissapare through the puff of blueberry smoke. He
wondered i other fellow travelers had dissapered,

Although it was a long way away . He put
Beerwombats key around his neck, the key to the
secret burrow. In the meantime him and hopnotic
set up camp within the cave in front of the
gigantic waterfall and lake. and Pondered his
next move.

Noble thought for a while and then had to go
and water a nearby bush. Noble returned without
incident. sat back down, and Nodded off while
Hopnotic lay beside him.

Noble woke up from his nap , as hopnotic tussled awake beside him
. He thought back to many tarvlerrs he had come across and missed.

With that all of sudden Tinzgut appeared and also dissapered
in a puff of smoke. What was this cloud of smoke.
Was it a sorceresses or witches ill intention-ed experiment.
Rachellvoinglife and her family all dissapred in
a poof of smoke and now tingzut as well.

Why has the mysterious smoke not taken
noble and hopnotic. It only happened within
the huge cave that Hoppy and Noble were
traversing. Well hoppy lets us continue within
this cave and follow this path that seems to lead
behind this waterfall. The waterfall within the cave
was gigantic and would take of couple of days to
traverse. But it seemed the only other way to
proceed. Noble and Hopnotic continued down
the waterfalls path. Noble always loved the
water , but had to be careful , one could never
tell of the dangers that may lie beneath the
pleasant looking waves. Hopnotic was almost
eaten by a lockness one day while catching fish
and putting it inside his pouch. Luckily Noble
pulled his kangaroo companion out just in the
nick of time. Noble petted Hopnotic while he
thought of that past incident. Hopnotic ,stop for
a bit , i need to refill my flask with coffee. with that
Noble went to get water to boil for his coffee,
while being unaware of passerby's at the moment.
NOble returned sat down again sipped his coffee,

Hopnotic i have no idea what this puff of smoke
is that carries my fellow travelers away. I must
think of way to find it, rescue the people that it took.
but where did it take them. Noble entered a
meditative state while trying to resolve the issue
at hand. He started to notice that some passerby's
were not taken by the tornado shaped cloud of
smoke, yet others are. Why was this strange
cloud selective of which travelers it took.?

Noble
asked himself. Was it timing. did other travelers
injure the cloud. wait thought noble, is it possible
that the cloud is alive itself or is someone
controlling it,hmmm Noble pondered further.

All of the sudden Noble saw his old friend
rascalzombiejuice on the path.
Rascal Noble cried out, what are you doing
within this gigantic cave and do you know anything
about this Tornado shaped cloud of smoke that takes
some people but not others. Noble waited for
rascal to reply.

Rascal said that he recently moved
cross country on this weird land of younow
and decided to explore the cave. Beware the puff
of smoke Noble warned if it finds you it may take you
without warning;

Already it has taken more of my friends
but i know not to where. Thank you Noble I shall
be careful and with that Rascal continued out the cave
the way Noble had come in.

Noble rested
again. I seem to be very weary my
lovely kangaroo companion. Noble
lay down on a nearby log ,while hoptnoic
his trusty and faithful companion and
fellow warrior lay down next to him. Some of
the travelers were so oblivious to some of the
dangers of this younowland that they continued
onward and did not even scream when picked up
by this puff of smoke. Noble looked at his communication
device. Only static when he tried to call others
who had disssapred in the puff of smoke.
With that Deborah came down the path.
Deborah be careful within this cave.
a puff of smoke has been carrying off
people, I know not where to find it.

,Andy also came down the caves path shortly after.
He warned Andy of the cloud of smoke
within this giant cave that was picking up
travelers randomly. Deborah and Andy looked
at each other with fright in their eyes.
We shall do our utmost best to be careful
and on the lookout noble. Hopntoic
Nobles Kangaroo as always sniffed Debs
and Andy's pockets for treats. Deb had a
few dog bones left over before she dissapred
and ended up in the land of yhounow
hopntoic ate them up happily. With
that Deb bid noble and Andy a due
and continued down the path.

Now
kiss appeared but also the puff of smoke
whoosh and she was gone.
Noble Andy and the Kangaroo looked
aghast. See Andy i told you
the evil puff of smoke. Deb turned
and came back down the path
running to see if the smoke had taken
Noble Andy and Hopnotic.
no it only took kiss.

It seemed
very selective of which travelers it took.
Noble still could not figure out
how to find it or where the missing
travelers went to. Andy turned
and bid all a due,

I shall be careful
of this smoke Andy said as he continued
down the waterfalls path within the
gigantic cave. Deb bid farewell to noble
and also said she would be aware of this
evil smoke that was snatching up people
within this gigantic cave.

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