Wow, this was a great treat to start my day. Your artwork is evocative and really reflects the story world you're building.
My question right now would be Where does Sureev come from? They seem to be badass and come from a hard background, but from where and how did they manage not to get snagged by the tracking units?
Basically, it's already got mystery enough right there for me. I'm following you and will keep up, as I'm a huge sci-fi/fantasy fan.
Thanks for the kind words. Your comment makes me want to develop this universe even more.
As I mentioned below Sureev comes from a place he calls "the outside". People he encounters are having a hard time grasping the concept as most of them never thought about something else than work. Some even found his stories captivating. "The outside" seems dry and apparently presents unstable gravity. Creatures still manage to survive this harsh environment. Sureev did.
Having such experience gives him an edge on the control units. He knows well how to hide, to dodge and to hit right on spot. He's still pretty young when the story starts. Probably a teenager but we'd follow him as he matures.