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RE: Mindful Moments: Perfecting The Pause - Chapter Two (for Beta-Readers)

in #blog4 years ago

What a wonderful chapter 2, thank you so much for this Eric!
Some real nit-picking here:
...today if I hadn't begun practicing meditation.
...making an actionable plan to begin my...
...toxic byproduct worry,
The truth is that worry...
...everyone experiences fear; some of us...
...able to proudly add “fear slayer”

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Thank you, @lizelle! I really appreciate the notes! I'll be incorporating these into the final version and will post chapter 3 very soon. I hope you and the family are having a wonderful Sunday!