Chapter Two ~ Worry & Fear
I would tend to use “and” rather than an ampersand here.
Also, once you have a “final” draft of the entire book, do a search for generic dagger-type apostrophes and quotation marks and replace them with the curly kinds.
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Thank you for that feedback, @preparedwombat! This is exactly the kind of advice I'm needing now.