You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Editing - the harsh reality

in #busy6 years ago

Okay, now I've got this running through my head ...."Conjunction Junction, what's your function?" .... lol.

I much prefer your edited version; as it's more concise and less "rambling", even though the section is longer.

Sort:  

I had it too, so here you go:


I hope it plays, that is so old. I can't say I really learned anything, just the tune, to riffle through the brain. But it was a semi fun blast from the past.
Hope it works for you.

It played ... and it was a fun blast from the past, thank you! Hehehe. :)

Thank you. Yes, I have to stop being so wordy... but it's difficult! LOL