Very good summary of what's going on @buzzer11, now we need to work on the beginning and ends of your sentences, and spacing to shorten your paragraphs to 3 or 4 sentences.
Excellent work!!!
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Very good summary of what's going on @buzzer11, now we need to work on the beginning and ends of your sentences, and spacing to shorten your paragraphs to 3 or 4 sentences.
Excellent work!!!