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RE: [Short Story] - A revolutionary product

in #davidkain6 years ago

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He wanted to act tough but I could tell he was already tripping hard–his eyes turned vacant and his head was wobbling side to side. “What did you do to me?”

It looked as if his body liquefied and spilled over his leather armchair.

Come Monday Ray was in a far better mood–I had a product he was very much interested in.

“Synthetic rubber.” I peeled off the clear coat of rubber from my arm as if it were an additional sleeve–the expression on his face was priceless.

Yesss! The synthetic rubber layer was priceless!

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Now that you mentioned these.... I have a hard time re-picking my favorite! :P

So very happy to hear you enjoyed it!