Loving this poem @josediccus. I also entered scuzzy slam this week last minute ;-) It seems like we have tackled similar subject matter my friend. I too would like to highlight these lines as a great metaphor for the battle against the inner critic.
Fiction is a fact
battling beasts without flesh
a figment of our anxiety
Also, loved these images:
abstract beelzebub lurking
ethreal foes
entities without arms or toes
hurling spears at nemesis within
Nice work!
Hahaha you entered too? Wow well I love @scuzzy's contest and it help me prunes my ideas and concept and also help me learn how to work within a theme really.
Yeah thank you for highlighting those feets my friend, I was thinking the metaphors are not enough to convey my points, but,
Thank you so much my friend, I'll like to see your entry as well.