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Will do! It's getting pretty long, so might be posted for a while yet haha.

I'd say don't get too much in your own way. At some point good enough is good enough and you should publish! Too much polishing can lead to not publishing sometimes...

I think it just needs trimming a little bit.

I want to make sure my point comes across well without it sounding like a rant or rambling haha.

That's true, check out this free course, it has been an eye opener for me for editing:
https://www.udemy.com/secret-sauce-of-great-writing/

Cool! Will have a look at that for sure.

How is your article doing? Eager to read it!

It's getting there! :-)

Hopefully It'll be posted it soon.

Here it is: https://steemit.com/freedom/@futuristgear/the-4-hour-work-week-is-nonsense-here-s-why

Should have been longer because I haven't covered everything.

But, I guess the rest can be turned into more articles. :-)