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RE: I could have you and with your hug calm the cold... | Reality of life | Forbidden love | Original Poetry by @nachomolina | (ENG)

in #englishlast year

I love the repetition of the line 'I could have you and with your hug calm the cold' - and the line about nipples and salt! There's much of this poem that's a mystery, but some really stand out lines that resonate. The speaker is clearly full of desire but unable to enact it - he sounds quite threatening at times too, and desperate. I like the way these emotions come out in the poetry.

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