Little Teaser Story- If You Enjoy I Would Much Appreciate Your Feedback! ( I've Not Had Much Luck With Steemit So Far)

in #fiction8 years ago (edited)


'Alright boys, into bed you go!' 'But...' 'It's really late, you've got to go to bed before you Dad comes upstairs, OK ? Why Don't You Think Of Our Holiday We Are Going On ?' The young boys fast fell asleep, their Dad was not the type of person to go soft one them- it was really the complete opposite! 

Silence eroded in this ever lasting dream, distinguished by nothing other than darkness and this was darkness that never ended. There was a reason this darkness never ended. No reason to be happy of though. Why not though, there was peace, and silence for their parents to enjoy the evening to themselves! This was a night where Jack and Jacob were not to be seen. 

Morning came, this is when their next to be worried parents realised that their children had disappeared. 'Honey, Where Are The Children?!' 'Ughrr: Don't worry, they are probably hiding somewhere' 

Outside was a trail of blood along all the roads in this small village, it was called 'The Village Of Lost'. Every road had this trail of blood, this was fiction, it could not be explained. The television inside their living room had a massive hole in it and was strangely completely hollow inside. No electrics or cables or anything! 

Next to be known a rocket crash landed into the back garden with Jack and Jacob running out- they said they had a fantastic time on there holdiday at Steemit! They said they could not get enough of it!

So that was a little bit strange of a story, what do you think ? Not everything I do would be like that but I enjoy being creative and turning my mind upside down to come up with these weird endings. I'd love to hear from you guys if you where completely surprised on how weird that story was ( although it may not be a story, it may just be a bunch of gibberish and words put together)! Time to end with some, :) :) :) Smiley Faces :)

If you have not read some of my other posts, you won't know that I love to put some awesome smileys at the end of my posts just to make things epic! :)