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RE: The Well

in #finishthestory6 years ago

An adventurous ending, imbued with restless action and interesting hints. Nox performing a Double McTwist 1260 was really something. You rushed a bit in the final but I understand the struggle of packing so much creativity in so little space. Consider it as a push to choose only what's important for your main narrative idea. I will take care of the results, given Brisby's absence.