No, it becomes now incoherent. I am against it ;-) pls forgive me. Besides, it was so good to have thought of both dirge and @dirge
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No, it becomes now incoherent. I am against it ;-) pls forgive me. Besides, it was so good to have thought of both dirge and @dirge
Hahah well it's totally different I agree. Incoherent I wouldn't say.. actually it's two diff haikus. The first is more haiku than the second but not really. I wanted it scarier :-)
You had a real good thing in the first place.
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Smh 😂