Geechi Dan - DJ Premiere - The Piecemaker Freestyle // STEEMIT #RAPCHALLENGE
LYRICS:
Shoot ya sock up
Juice the glock up
You staring at a coffin ceiling, views to die for
You are not tough, If...you knew my motto.
I'd spit bars that kill you fools, yet you were not touched.
Metaphors, punchlines, hooks, I use a lot of.
Niggas be watching me chess (chest), but they don't got love
Glancing in my kitchen, they witness,
I cook a potluck
You not my partner, the vibe is awkward
Shouts out to my #pumagang, Kay (@kaykunoichi) she my accomplice,
We shooting coppers, Ishoot to drop ya
I see snakes in the grass clearly, new binoculars
Hold up though....Really who's stopping us?
When you rap, I'm at the operas
When I (w)rap they see an Octupus
My crew come together like Optimus
I'm better, you checking the populous?
You watching me, or you copy that?
You a pussy and a biter, so we gonna call you copycat
From freestyling in Pontiacs, and palming gats,
to wallet snatches,
Ziplocking packs, I been intact
Ya boy cool like a sixer pack
I'll shoot ya face, now fix ya hat.
I'll shoot ya face, now fix ya hat
Ya boy cool like a sixer pack.
:O I got a shout out????? Dang your flow is fire!!! #pumagang !
Flow is nice. Multis on point. Only part I thought you slipped a bit is when you switch up the scheme with "hold up though", took you about 2 bars to catch back up, but not a biggie. All in all man, was diggin it.
I see you're in ATL. What side you stay at? I'm downtown, William Oliver.
I always love constructive criticism. I shouldn't have been rushing. But I'm always about making the next time better. I definitely appreciate the feedback. I'm in the Mountain (Stone, Mountain)
Only way to elevate is constructive criticism, ya know? If everyone around me says "Ahhh shit! That's fire", what good will that do me in the long run? Gotta keep elevating.
Dope!! Haha I'm staring to appreciate you reminding us that you're the best. Anything that can push people to want to steal your crown(s) and also raising the bars for yourself.
Preciate it my G. This was an appetizer. I gotta come even harder next time. I got something a little longer for Jackin for Beats.
Killer wordplay bro!!
I entered in your "jackin for beats" challenge but i can't seem to put it as a reply on your post for some reason. Im'a keep trying, i did post it on my blog tho!
Bet, I'll give it some time and come back around and resteem it after I check it out. Good shit.
I swear they challenge blocking me bro, i can't make a reply on rondonson challenge either! The page keeps buffering like it does with your challenge post. Has this ever happened to you?
Yeah, it does that when Steemit is tripping. Try again later or switch to a different network and see if that helps.
Oh damn dude I didn't see this one. I just went with what was in the submission post. I usually look around but I was rushing to finish it up.
Oh nah I didn't post it yet. I did it early...cause I've been slipping up submitting things lately.