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RE: "Drown" original song Hive open mic week 66

in Hive Open Mic3 years ago

You know what I loved about this?

well - multiple things hahaha of course I loved your voice again! But that was no surprise!

But the lyrics! The listener would assume that the lyrics would go with the traditional and predictable "I can't say but I CAN" SO - what a lyrical surprise when we hear the hopeless quality of "I can't say but I CAN'T"

absolutely brilliant songwriting. something as simple as one word like that -changes the whole feeling! that was really fantastic. it made me feel the true powerlessness of drowning and surrender.

Beautiful job @graemesaxton