Cenizas de un oscuro pasado/Ashes of a dark past [ESP/ENG]

in Writing Club2 years ago (edited)

Esta historia comienza con Jack un chico de 18 años criado en el campo lejos de la ciudad, lejos de algún rastro de amor, cariño, comprensión o afecto alguno. Al contrario siempre recibiendo odio y desprecio por parte de su abuelo que desde pequeño lo crió ya que sus padres fallecieron en un aparatoso accidente automovilístico por culpa de una persona en estado de ebriedad cuando Jack apenas tenia 3 años.

Desde muy temprana edad lo obligaba a hacer todo el trabajo pesado de la granja,nunca lo dejaba salir a ninguna parte, lo agredia verbalmente y fisicamente, su abuelo era un alcohólico y tenia problemas para controlar su ira, tanto asi que un día golpeó a Jack con una pala hasta el punto de dejarlo incosciente. Su abuelo se lo pasaba viendo tv y bebiendo alcohol, lo poco que lograba producir Jack en la granja su abuelo se lo arrebataba para mantener su vicio, lo único que podia hacer Jack era esconder un poco de ese dinero para él.

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Todas las noches antes de dormir Jack se imaginaba como seria la ciudad (nunca la ha conocido), con esos enormes rascacielos y edificios, con autos modernos, comida rápida, miles de personas caminando por las calles, era su sueño conocerla algún dia.

Un dia muy temprano, Jack ya estaba decidido, se cansó de simplemente imaginar como seria la ciudad quería dejar la granja y comenzó a reparar una bicicleta vieja que estaba en el granero(no estaba en tan mal estado) mientras su abuelo estaba haciendo lo que siempre hacia (ver tv y beber licor), inteligentemente acomodó una pila de paja justo debajo de la ventana de su cuarto para en la noche poder saltar y no hacerse ningún daño.

La noche cayó y todo estaba perfectamente planificado para que su sueño se hiciera realidad, esperó a que su abuelo se quedara dormido, tomó coraje y saltó por la ventana cayendo encima del montón de paja para luego tomar la bicicleta y encaminarse hacia la ciudad.

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Jack, de camino a la ciudad tenia una sonrisa de oreja a oreja casi nada podria quitarle esa expresión de su rostro. Al llegar a la ciudad exclamó -¡Es justo como la soñé!- no lo podia creer estaba anonadado, no sabia a donde ir o que mirar, era el momento más feliz de su vida.

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Con el poco dinero que había reunido decidió comer algo y fue a un puesto de comida rápida pero lo que no sabia era que allí por primera vez en su vida experimentaria lo que es el amor, la chica que atendía en ese local de comida rápida era una diosa ante los ojos de Jack, -¿Qué es esta sensación tan extraña?- pensó el joven en su cabeza, no quiso saber más y fue directo al local, cuando estaba justo en frente de ella se quedó mudo no le salia una sola palabra, pudo ver en su franela que su nombre era Sara.

Sara al verlo pensó -Que chico tan extraño- y le dió lo que la mayoría de gente pide, un hotdog, Jack pagó y no dijo ni una sola palabra quedó en shock nunca habia experimentado algo similar, luego se apartó del sitio y se sentó a admirar la ciudad y disfrutar de su hotdog. Lo que no se imaginaba era que su abuelo se habia despertado porque las gallinas empezaron a hacer ruido, le gritó varias veces -Jack calla a esas malditas gallinas- al ver que no le respondía subió hasta su cuarto y vió la ventana abierta y que no estaba en su cama -JAAAAAAAAACK- gritó enfurecido, ya tenia claro a donde habia ido, al salir de la casa vió el granero abierto y se dió cuenta que su vieja bicleta ya no estaba rapidamente encendió su camioneta y fue a buscarlo.


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Su abuelo estaba en la ciudad y Jack no lo sabia, buscaba como loco mirando en cada rincón de la ciudad hasta que vió esa bicicleta esa maldita bicicleta y efectivamente a un lado estaba el muchacho, se bajó de la camioneta y lo único que se pudo escuchar fue -Te atrapé malnacido- tomó a Jack por la espalda y lo sujetó como si fuese un secuestro y dijo -Ya verás lo que te haré me las vas a pagar-. Las personas alrededor se quedaron mirando ante esta situación y Jack sentía todos los ojos postrados sobre él incluso los de aquella chica por la que sintió algo especial.

Con mucha agresividad lo montó a la camioneta y la puso a toda marcha saltándose semáforos y todo tipo de señales, las personas seguian impactadas ante este hecho sin embargo nadie dijo nada ni se opuso. Al llegar a la granja tomó a Jack por la cabellera y lo llevó arrastrando hacia el granero, lo tiró y le dijo -Jamás vuelvas a hacer eso o soy capaz de matarte con mis propias manos- Jack estaba cansado de tanto sufrimiento, estaba molesto asi que cuando su abuelo se dió la vuelta tomó la horca y... perforó el corazón de su abuelo dejándolo sin vida al instante.


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Sin remordimiento alguno miró sus manos temblorosas y pensó -Ya no sufriré más, pero si dejo ésto así de seguro me buscarán- entonces pensó en quemarlo todo, reducir todo a cenizas seria la única manera de no dejar rastro alguno, decidió liberar a todos los animales, en un saco recogió todas sus cosas, luego vació el tanque de la camioneta y exparció gasolina por toda la casa y el granero donde estaba el cuerpo de su abuelo, hasta que finalmente con una pequeña llama de un fósforo encendió la granja y quemando asi todo a su paso.


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Emprendió su rumbo hacia la gran ciudad en busca de sus sueños solo con su saco y algunas cosas, ansioso por volver a estar allí y tal vez mirar otra vez a aquella chica. A lo lejos se podían ver las llamaradas de la granja y el sabia que en algún momento ya no estarían que solo serían cenizas, al igual que todo su pasado.

GRACIAS POR PRESTAR ATENCIÓN ESPERO LES HAYA GUSTADO ESTA PEQUEÑA HISTORIA Y QUE LA DISFRUTARAN COMO YO AL ESCRIBIRLA

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This story begins with Jack, an 18-year-old boy raised in the country far from the city, far from any trace of love, care, understanding or affection. On the contrary, always receiving hatred and contempt from his grandfather who raised him since he was a child since his parents died in a spectacular car accident due to a drunken person when Jack was just 3 years old.

From an early age he forced him to do all the heavy work on the farm, he never let him go anywhere, he verbally and physically assaulted him, his grandfather was an alcoholic and had problems controlling his anger, so much so that a day he beat Jack with a shovel to the point of rendering him unconscious. His grandfather spent his time watching TV and drinking alcohol, the little that Jack managed to produce on the farm, his grandfather took from him to support his vice, the only thing Jack could do was hide a little of that money for himself.

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Every night before sleeping Jack imagined what the city would be like (he has never known it), with those huge skyscrapers and buildings, with modern cars, fast food, thousands of people walking the streets, it was his dream to meet it sometime day.

One day very early, Jack had already made up his mind, he got tired of just imagining what the city would be like, he wanted to leave the farm and he started to repair an old bicycle that was in the barn (it was not in such bad condition) while his grandfather was doing what he always did (watching tv and drinking liquor), he cleverly arranged a pile of straw just below his bedroom window so at night he could jump out and not hurt himself.

Night fell and everything was perfectly planned for his dream to come true, he waited for his grandfather to fall asleep, took courage and jumped out the window falling on top of the pile of straw and then took the bicycle and headed towards the city.

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Jack, on the way to the city had a smile from ear to ear almost nothing could take that expression off his face. Upon arriving in the city he exclaimed -It's just like I dreamed it!-He couldn't believe it, he was stunned, he didn't know where to go or what to look at, it was the happiest moment of his life.

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With the little money he had gathered, he decided to eat something and went to a fast food stall, but what he did not know was that there for the first time in his life he would experience what love is, the girl who served in that local fast food was a goddess in Jack's eyes, -What is this strange feeling? - thought the young man in his head, he didn't want to know more and went straight to the place, when he was right in front of her he was speechless he didn't a single word came out, he could see on her flannel that her name was Sara.

When Sara saw him, she thought -What a strange boy- and gave him what most people ask for, a hotdog, Jack paid and didn't say a single word, he was shocked, he had never experienced anything similar, then he left the site and sat down to admire the city and enjoy his hotdog. What he did not imagine was that his grandfather had woken up because the chickens began to make noise, he yelled at him several times -Jack shut up those damn chickens- seeing that he did not answer him, he went up to his room and saw the open window and that there was no He was in his bed -JAAAAAAAAACK- he shouted furiously, he already knew where he had gone, when he left the house he saw the barn open and realized that his old bicycle was no longer there, he quickly started his truck and went to look for it.


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His grandfather was in the city and Jack didn't know it, he was looking like crazy looking in every corner of the city until he saw that bike, that damn bike and sure enough the boy was on one side, he got out of the truck and the only thing that could be heard was -I caught you bastard- took Jack from behind and held him as if it were a kidnapping and said -You'll see what I'll do to you, you're going to pay me-. The people around him stared at this situation and Jack felt all the eyes on him, including those of that girl for whom he felt something special.

Very aggressively he mounted him to the truck and put it into full gear, skipping traffic lights and all kinds of signs. People continued to be shocked at this fact, however, no one said anything or objected. Arriving at the farm, he grabbed Jack by the hair and dragged him to the barn, threw him and said -Never do that again or I'm capable of killing you with my own hands- Jack was tired of so much suffering, he was so upset that when his grandfather turned around he took the pitchfork and... pierced his grandfather's heart rendering him instantly lifeless.


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Without any remorse, he looked at his trembling hands and thought -I will not suffer anymore, but if I leave this like this, they will surely look for me- then he thought of burning everything, reducing everything to ashes would be the only way to leave no trace, he decided to free all the animals, in a sack he collected all his things, then he emptied the truck's tank and spread gasoline throughout the house and the barn where his grandfather's body was, until finally with a small flame from a match he lit the farm and burned So everything in its path.


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He set out on his way to the big city in search of his dreams with only his jacket and a few things, eager to be back there and maybe look at that girl again. In the distance you could see the flames of the farm and he knew that at some point they would no longer be there, they would only be ashes, just like all of his past. </ enter>

THANK YOU FOR PAYING YOUR ATTENTION I HOPE YOU HAVE LIKED THIS LITTLE STORY AND ENJOYED IT AS MUCH AS I WROTE IT

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muy interesante relato, tambien las fotografias fueron muy bien elegidas.
Gracias por compartirlo.
Saludos

Gracias por compartir esta historia bastante cruda pero a la vez con mucho drama al mejor estilo de novela, relato y por que no del cine. Buenas imágenes complementarias, lo he disfrutado @juliocesar090477

Gracias a ti por disfrutarla

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