thanks for the reply and oh yes it's insane from the top down instead of perhaps the way it's being portrayed at times imho
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thanks for the reply and oh yes it's insane from the top down instead of perhaps the way it's being portrayed at times imho
Thinking about to power down , get the coin out and have some fun in the real world with it , Hive is filled up with mask-tards and woke-turts , DV-ing the shit out of free-thinkers . The hive has bin compromised , can't fight lunacy for lunacy does not reason or communicate . This is not the time to start a writing career for me , not enough potential readers out there anymore .
They want word salad , not bim bim bim . there wishing my spirit would die .
I have recently heard a few quotes that seem kinda fitting especially if you like to write things that have a different flavor or take , think you know what I mean. ;)
"Tune Out the Noise" and "Listen to your visitors" , I wish for your spirit not to die btw
No worry's there wish is a fiction they have , for my spirit is eternal .
I will keep writing , just for the spirit of it , the fun of it .
Yield it's power , and put down the words , till they lynch me for it .
They will destroy themselves , and in some far of future someone might find my words again . Someone that has my spirit , someone that will not make a fucked up religion out of it i hope . ;-)
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ENGAGEtokens.It isn't just the Hive, it's the whole world. The VAST MAJORITY of people are happy to go along with the agenda, as long as the refrigerator is full and there's something on TV.
If you want to 'make it' as a writer, you either have to write for that VAST MAJORITY of people, or you have to put a lot of time into finding your audience.
I didn't read your whole fiction piece, because the editing was horrible. That might be why it was downvoted. If you had labeled it as 'poetry', people would have fewer expectations of the grammar. I was wondering if it was supposed to be a part of the story... your punctution and grammar are much better in your comments. If the 'mistakes' in your story were intentional, that didn't come across very well.
That last paragraph was constructive criticism. I don't know how upset you got before your comments at the bottom of your fiction story, but if you want a career in writing, which is essentially entertainment, you either need to make that anger a part of your 'persona', or get it in check. The people who can move your career forward, publishers and audience alike, will have little tolerance for it.
They do indeed want word salad. If you want to succeed in their world, feed it to them. If you want to succeed on YOUR terms, be prepared for a long, slow, frustrating, draining road to success. I've known very few people who found success by running against the grain, and even fewer who enjoyed it.
Thanks , finally a comment i can work with ,and indeed i wrote it in some sage style poetic form , and yes i should have pointed this out better . Thought calling it raw would do it . The downvotes came from other comment's totally unrelated to it , i made on other places . No anger over not being successful , i am learning , i know nothing , the coin is not my goal . To me it's learning how to communicate true creative expression's . A DV with no feedback , is so frustrating for me ,.. could have put some pictures in to . ;-)
I had noticed that you called the piece 'raw' fiction,so I wasn't expecting a real polished piece, but I wasn't expecting something so raw that it would be difficult to read. Trying to meet (or manage) people's expectations is always going be difficult.
I had a few early downvotes without explanation that were likewise puzzling, it turned out be someone who was automatically downvoting EVERY upvote from someone else, it had nothing at all to do with my content. Try not to let downvotes get in your head, especially if you're not here to chase the coin. Keep improving your work and putting it out there, eventually your audience will find you.
I've seen a few writing-oriented communities around here, though the only one I can remember right now is The Ink Well. One of them has weekly free-write contests, any of them would probably get you noticed more if you're going to post without pictures. I've been getting some love in the Rant, Complain, Talk community with word-only posts. Not a lot of rewards, but there are many people in that community who will take the time to READ.
I'm guessing that some of the problems I'm seeing in your work are because English is not your first language. If you ever want someone to do some free editing for you, let me know.
Thks for the advice and offer . learned some . :-)
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