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RE: Will There Ever Exist A Life Without You?

Hello @davidbright. Lovely piece. The first step is realizing a wrong has been committed against the partner in a relationship. Then acknowledgement. Your character did that. Next the decision on whether the relationship was worth saving. If so, then comes the plan on how to resolve the issues. Finally, the all important promise not to be given lightly.

I loved your story from beginning to end. This has happened around the world every day. Some work itself out; others, end. Sometimes messy. The key is to learn from one's mistakes so a repeat won't occur.

Thanks for sharing your piece. Take care, and have a good rest of your week.

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