Good observation. It felt like you are actually talking to yourself. By the way, in my opinion you deserve an encouragement as you have produced a good piece of writing on your very 1st try.
Good observation. It felt like you are actually talking to yourself. By the way, in my opinion you deserve an encouragement as you have produced a good piece of writing on your very 1st try.
that's what I see in the lives of teenagers today, and I write as it happens. Thank you @puma009 for reading my post.