Kimberley's story - Part 5

in Freewriters4 years ago

My name is Kimberley. And today I'm watching my own cremation.

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I see them all, piece by piece: all the people who didn't give a f#ck about me. Who never cared about me, who broke my heart, and who were only there at the cremation now to show that they supposedly loved me.
Pretending to care that I'm dead now. Loons all of them. Ridiculous people.

Yes, they are. Look, Priscilla over there. She walks away halfway through the cremation. Those other girlfriends of hers are still standing, not far from my mother.

Mother, my mother, who always let me know she was disappointed in me.

I'm looking at my father. My father, who called me a whore. Look at them now. Now they are crying!

Look at Umesh, that f#ck@ng bastard. Now if only I could spit on him from here!

And there's Derrick. And Steve. And Aunt Astrid. And Iwan. Well well, these people have some nerve coming to my cremation after all they've done to me.

All of them are talking about how I've committed suicide. But I haven't commit suicide.
I have been murdered. They killed me. Together they killed me. Don't worry, I'll tell you how.

My name is Kimberley and this is my story...

...to be continued...

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Thank you for reading.

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I love the part where you made it clear that Kimberly never had a great relationship with her family. The cremation too is a foreshadow of what would eventually happen to Kim; she died.
Angie, the question on my lips now is how did Kim die? Surely, I would be keeping my arms crossed. You are a good storyteller.

@berba007 thank you very much 🌻
I'm sorry, I'm a little bit late with my upload because of my exams. You can read the rest veryyyy sooon..😄 thank you very much for supporting me❤

You are always welcome @angie08 . Good luck in your exams, wish I could be of help to keep you tops,but I am sure you will do fine.

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