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Seeing the beauty of the sky never meant a thing to me,
But your presence makes each day a beauty to me,
You gladden my heart from the very first day we met
And I can't help the strange happy tears that almost filled my ears.
When it was I alone against the world,
I was undoubtedly in the pain brought on by the world,
And, I never knew I could call someone my world,
Until you changed my world.
Life is filled with unfairness,
And I handled the pain and bitterness,
But your presence made me realize,
That those pains were more harmful than I realize.
My eyes have seen and my ears heard,
My hands have worked and my body toiled,
Endlessly, I have suffered in great misery,
But no one knew until you came and noticed.
It was funny how we met that day,
Strangers sitting side by side minding their business,
Until we both turned and the world couldn't mind its business,
It made the yacht our witness.
The scenery that welcomed us was divine.
Our meeting was superficial,
The world was strangely engrossed in our divinity,
And we allowed them to see the specialty.
From that day I knew,
I have been born anew,
As our world has clashed to renew,
Changing our world more than we knew.
What Can You See?
I see the beauty of the blue-white striped sky surrounding two strangers, a trash can, a tree, and a big yacht.
What Can You Feel?
I feel a sense of harmony between mother nature and humanity.
A picture is more than a thousand words and these are the words spoken to me.
Still yours truly,
Balikis.
Thanks for reading.
Peace be unto those who crave it and more those who chase it away.
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Imagen de @wakeupkitty
Ver la belleza del cielo nunca significó nada para mí,
Pero tu presencia hace que cada día sea una belleza para mí,
Alegraste mi corazón desde el primer día que nos conocimos
Y no puedo evitar las extrañas lágrimas de felicidad Que casi llenan mis oídos.
Cuando era yo solo contra el mundo
Yo estaba sin duda en el dolor traído por el mundo,
Y, nunca supe que podía llamar a alguien mi mundo,
Hasta que tu cambiaste mi mundo.
La vida está llena de injusticia,
Y manejé el dolor y la amargura,
Pero tu presencia me hizo darme cuenta,
Que esos dolores eran más dañinos de lo que creía.
Mis ojos han visto y mis oídos oído,
Mis manos han trabajado y mi cuerpo se ha afanado,
Sin fin, he sufrido en gran miseria,
Pero nadie lo sabía hasta que llegaste y te diste cuenta.
Fue curioso cómo nos conocimos aquel día,
Extraños sentados uno al lado del otro ocupándose de sus asuntos,
Hasta que ambos nos volvimos y el mundo no pudo ocuparse de sus asuntos,
Hizo del yate nuestro testigo.
El paisaje que nos recibió era divino.
Nuestro encuentro fue superficial,
El mundo estaba extrañamente absorto en nuestra divinidad,
Y les permitimos ver la especialidad.
Desde ese día supe,
He nacido de nuevo,
Mientras nuestro mundo ha chocado para renovarse,
Cambiando nuestro mundo más de lo que sabíamos.
¿Qué puedes ver?
Veo la belleza del cielo a rayas blancas y azules que rodea a dos extraños, un cubo de basura, un árbol y un gran yate.
¿Qué puedes sentir?
Siento una sensación de armonía entre la madre naturaleza y la humanidad.
Una imagen vale más que mil palabras y estas son las palabras que me han dicho.
Sinceramente suyo,
Balikis.
Gracias por leer.
Que la paz sea con los que la anhelan y más con los que la ahuyentan.
I feel so as well. You never cease to wow me with how thoughtful you are with your words, carefully scripting each line so it flows to the next. Well-done.
Hehe, you pamper with your words whereas you are the guru here. I am just trying to follow your trail, Ma'am.
Awwwwnnn.... romantic you know
All pains ceased immediately your soulmate arrived
Hehe, it did. The sky is a wonderful beauty.
This is a well scripted piece, seeing beyond the obvious
Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
Two worlds met and changed each other, proving to be present for the other when ever needed . One thing about life : we all need THAT someone who gets you like no one else and once anyone finds his second halfthe joy that follows is beyond spoken words 🥰🥰.
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Hehe, the joy is really beyond spoken words. Specialty can do that.
Thanks for stopping by sweet Nkem.
Life is misery. We live it as if it will crash today.
It is indeed a misery. An unsolved mystery.
Well I was about to ask who is the lucky man til I realise that you deployed the usage of personification, projecting a sense of affection and gratitude towards the sky as if it were a person. That is lovely, a good sense if creativity.
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Thanks for the analysis. I appreciate your words.
The sky is a loving soul which deserves unlimited love.
It must be great to finally find someone who faces life with you. Those two people met and must feel so much better.
I like the fact you did not write about the yacht but two people instead.
Thanks for your entry.
Thanks for your presence here and I appreciate your thoughtful words.
Meeting someone who makes the world a better place is amazing.
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Genial. Muy interesante poema. Agradecido de haberlo podido leer, gracias por compartirlo.
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