The Date Night : ZapFic Monday (Week 33): prompt: "bug"

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This week the prompt is "bug". I hope to be able to capture the essence of this simple but powerful word. I have included the link to this week's challenge in case you'd like to participate: It's the only way to start the week...it's ZapFicMonday! Write me a story in 240-characters or less.

Thank you @felt.buzz, @Zapfic.Club, and Freewriters Community for this writing exercise. As required in the rules. I have taken a screenshot of the word counter for this story.


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I hope you like my story for this week's prompt:

After dating for 2 months, Mary decided a date night would be fun.

Cleaning done. She greets her date; he's impressed.

They sit. Mary sees a bug on Roger's shirt. Horrified, she apologizes.

Roger turns, saying "No problem. it came with me".

See you next time.

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@clicks2cash

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     2 years ago (edited) 

    Hello @clicks2cash. What good intentions the young lady had. And especially after all the cleaning to prepare for the date. I can imagine how embarrassing the situation became for both the host and guest once the bug was discovered.

    I'd like to bring to your attention that the ZAPFIC Monday is a 240-character story maximum. Please read the Rules of the contest.

    Thanks for sharing. Have a good rest of your week.

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     2 years ago  

    Hello @justclickindiva. Yes, I'm sure the host was embarrassed. At least her guest tried to lighten the situation with a bit of humor. The story has been updated. Thank you for the support.

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       2 years ago  

      Roger must be a bug man, that is why he easily understand that it came with him.

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      Hi @johnbenn. You guessed it. Thanks for the support..

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       2 years ago  

      Thank you too, you are welcome

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