stuck in a world like a working bee.
Hours become days and years,
then we are just memory in tears.
flesh blood and bone.
The only escape of this dark road,
is to follow God's code.
poor and old with food to feed.
To bring joy to smallest of ours,
spread goodness till the final hours.
suffer from the past, to long for the future, but to forget the present.
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Writing a poem is one of the most difficult task for me and I try it hardly .
But it seems you can write good poem. I read it and enjoyed it.
Why do you think it is difficult?
It doesn't have to rhyme. You can write whatever you want. 🙂
Thank you.
Because it is not the task which seems hard to me 😅.
I will keep it in mind and I will try it in my free time. Thank you for this suggestion..
I know this feeling... It's been many years since I wrote one in (my native language) Arabic, and I
never wrote oneonly wrote bad ones in English...I think you should try, though~
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Small yet powerful poem with a strong message.
Death is inevitable so before it happens we should accomplish deeds that are beneficial to this world according to God's directions
Thank you.
Yes, it is. And maybe along the way, to give guidance to the future generation, to be good to everyone.
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Wow so meaningful! It's really hard to make a poem but you are doing it easily!
You deserve some !PIZZA
I was hungry, thank you 😂
Why everyone keeps telling it's hard or difficult? 🙂 You are laying down your emotions or/and opinion. Everyone has the talent to write it's in our nature. We choose paper or speech.
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Lifting us so high,
Like angels in the sky.
See easy 😂😂 Choose one word and start writing. Imagine your are a DJ or a rapper. You can make even stupid stuff like this 😜
I'm doing my rap,
Like mouse in a trap.
Trying to rhyme,
don't have the time.
I just want pizza to eat,
Not doing some sick beat.
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Hahahaha lol you are cool! I'm having difficulty finding rhymes that are related from the last line hahaha
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I have to say this statement just covers almost all. Like... God's time is best. While we do his will, he sets every line in place for us proving all the time that he made all, he owns all and has made us masters too- over time!
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A lovely poem on time, reminding us of time always pass by.
Nice work with the pen and do enjoy the rest of your day, came in through Dreemport.
Great poem. On the one hand, you think it's negative but you take us in the other direction in the second half.
This is actually a great poem!!!
...As a Muslim, I believe in these things, that the world is designed with care and being a good person, (even when it's illogical to be, like sleeping hungry to feed an old man,) is better because it's in harmony with the "code" the world is designed to be.
The thing is, knowing a truth, and fighting insincts to follow it are different things.
Thanks for the poem that allowed me to reflect on all of this~
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A lovely little poem on time, Yoan. The best way to pass our time on this earth, is in God's word 🙏 I love that you have the @give-cat-food banner on the bottom of your post 🤗
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