Hello @freewritehouse
My favorite freewrite for this week is a nice peice beautifully written by @bold-n-italics
She wrote on Tuesday's prompt and here's the Link if you would love to read it.
Her freewrite revolves around a lady who wakes up in the light of day and begin to bask in the joy of having to sleep next to an important figure in her life. She admires the physical traits of her lover as she gets more excited about his birth anniversary falling on that day. While thinking about what gift to purchase for him, she gets stuck and tempted to ask him what perfect gift he would like and his response is one which gave her an everlasting blush.
In his words: "What Gift do you give to a person who has everything ???”.
That right there is a beautiful line that made me fall in love with the freewrite. She used it in a beautiful context that could make one want to taste what love feels like. His words to his her meant that he was satisfied with having her by his side and that alone meant everything to him and in turn, places the importance of every other gift at average.
In summary, I would say that what I love about this freewrite is the fact that it conveys a wonderful message of love and assurance. The imagery was one that she set finely so that one could imagine the scene and even in realism. Her freewrite is quite descriptive and the usage of simple sentences makes it easier for a reader to understand. I give it a five!
@ubani1 kindly recommend a freewrite that you have read. You could win some hbi for yourself. Thank you.
Thank you @faith65.
I am glad you were able to perceive the feeling I attempted to express.
Cheers
Sure thing. I love to draft a meaning from every story. well done.
Wow! thanks dear.
How do i join?
Just go to the freewriters community and read some freewrites. Pick your favorite and come back here to state why you liked the freewrite. Also include the link.
Okay dear, thanks
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