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RE: Approaching Womanhood | 7 May 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2365 | Prompt: not so stable (no tan estable)

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Poor Nadine! Luther's appearance at Molly's doorstep was all I needed to know that this young and experienced city boy had broken our young protagonist's heart. A beautifully written story that explores a young lady's journey to maturation and self-discovery!

Infatuation is a strong emotion that teenagers and young adults often deal with, until a mature adult or elder steps in to guide them right. However, not every lady is fortunate to get this guidance. Some go ahead and make a terrible mistake and live the rest of their lives trying to correct it. Thankfully, Molly and Arthur set aside thier differences to guide and support their daughter.

Did Luther do right by Nadine? 🤔 In a way, yes but I think he shouldn't have led her on from the beginning! 😄 A fine story! Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day. !PIMP

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First, did Luther do right by Nadine? I'm mixed on that issue as well. He would have been completely wrong to have enticed her into a physical relationship, then left. Thankfully, he came to his senses when she began planning an elopement when his plans were far from that. I feel it was all in Nadine mind and feelings. Of course, he could have snapped her out of that daydream before that fateful day of her running away. And again, thankfully, she only went as far as in town.

Second, a lesson in adolescence. Her mother knew exactly what Nadine was going through, since she experienced the same thing. Whether it was with her current husband, she didn't divulge that.

Teens feel that there is nothing past that stage of their lives, so their focus is wholeheartedly self-centered. Consequences never enter the picture. Oftentimes, situations don't work out and harm befalls the youth. I'm glad it worked out in a roundabout way for Nadine. Hopefully, she learns from her mistake.

Thanks so much for your visit and thoughtful analysis of my story. I appreciate it and your engagement. Take care.