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RE: A coming off age story

in Freewriters3 years ago

Interesting choice of preposition. I wonder if he has entered a more flexible timeline, that he can envision the thoughts/experiences of an elderly person (always a wet spot in the underwear is my favorite) at the age of 32. Has he died? Become multidimensional? 32 is too old to be suddenly of age for anything, so I know this word, off, was carefully chosen.

Hm. Mind spinning story. I'm loving your micro-fiction.

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Off it is. I suddenly just wondered about the frase - I often do... But I let it hang in the air how he did it...