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RE: Week - 1/5/2021 - Tell us About a Favorite Freewrite and Win

I'm a day late, but am still going to give a shout-out to @wandrnrose7's freewrite, The Leaving.

https://hive.blog/hive-161155/@wandrnrose7/the-leaving

She starts out with a description of the rain, and compares it to flowing tears, which aptly sets the scene for a sad story. I felt Peter's despair over the loss of his arm, and I felt the sadness of his mother, who couldn't make it all better for him. I wanted to know what happened next, but I also didn't want to know, just in case it got even sadder.

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You are not late at all :)