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Hello, community of lovers of lyrics and poetry.
This theme about jealousy reminded me of a fellow writer who, because she was in charge of managing a literary institution, believed herself to be superior and esa arrogant.
For this reason it occurred to me to put myself in their shoes to try to understand her way of being and the following poem emerged:
A life that seems
apparently very active,
reflecting intelligence
from the mouth up.
As a child, a limp
She seized a cane,
that, connected to my neurons,
It made me itch.
a sourness in my mouth
that looked like a downpour,
the string of things
that she said without reason.
I blamed her
to high-heeled shoes
That they were very tall,
and I felt a lot of pressure. .
One day someone told me:
what was the motive or reason
of being so acidic
for no apparent reason?
I went back years
in my movie of emotion,
I didn't even see a father
caressing my chin.
A stunned mother
of so much work and sun,
because she sold preserves
there on the boardwalk.
A kindergarten
crying and with a reason,
the guts sounded
with so much food
After that landscape
that my mind found
in the trunk of memories
there I was.
Now I can understand
that my limp is not right
because the shoes
they squeeze me in the heart
And where do your shoes pinch you?
Hola, comunidad de amantes de las letras y la poesía.
Esta temática sobre los celos, me hizo recordar a una colega escritora que por estar a cargo de la dirección de una institución literaria se creía superior y era prepotente.
Por tal motivo se me ocurrió ponerme en sus zapatos para tratar de entender su manera de ser y surgió el siguiente poema
Una vida que parece
aparente muy activa,
reflejando inteligencia
de la boca para arriba.
De pequeña, una cojera
se apoderó de un bastón,
que, conectado a mis neuronas,
me producia comezón.
una acidez en mi boca
que parecía un chaparrón,
la retahíla de cosas
que decía sin razón.
Yo le achacaba la culpa
a los zapaticos de tacón
Que eran muy altos,
y sentía mucha presión. .
Un día alguien me dijo:
¿cuál era el motivo o razón
de ser yo tan ácida
sin aparente razón?
Me remonté años atrás
en mi película de emoción,
ni siquiera ví a un padre
acariciándome el mentón.
Una madre aturdida
de tanto trabajo y sol,
pues vendía conservas
allá en el malecón .
Un jardín de infancia
llorando y con una razón,
las tripas le sonaban
con tanta pelazón
Después de ese paisaje
que mi mente encontró
en el baúl de recuerdos
allí estaba yo .
Ahora puedo entender
que mi cojera no tiene razón
porque los zapaticos
me aprietan es en el corazón
¿Y a ti, donde te aprietan tus zapaticos?
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Your poem is a powerful and moving exploration of the impact of jealousy. I appreciate your willingness to put yourself in the shoes of someone you don't understand, and I think you did a good job of capturing the pain and insecurity that can come from feeling jealous.
The poem's imagery is vivid and evocative, and I particularly like the lines about the "sourness in the mouth" and the "high-heeled shoes" that "squeeze in the heart." These images help to convey the sense of bitterness and constriction that jealousy can cause.
I also think the poem's ending is very strong. The question "Where do your shoes pinch you?" is a powerful way to invite the reader to reflect on their own experiences with jealousy.
Overall, I think this is a well-written and insightful poem that will resonate with many readers.
That's true @davidbright, jealous can cause bitterness and constriction feelings in some lnsecurity persons. I often try yo put myself in the shoes of someone I don't understand because I know about jealous by my own experience and they cause pain un our heart very much
i try to be careful about jealous. Thank you very much for your wonderful analysis of my poem
I am glad I was able to get the message you were trying to pass across. This shows that you did so well with it. Keep writing.
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Thank you again @davidbright. Of course I wiil continúe writing, I love and enjoy that too much
What beautiful verses you share with us tonight, so much feeling expressed, in precise lines and so beautifully written.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.
Thank you, @rinconsito for your support . I wrote this poem with the help of God and with all my love .It Is pleasure for me your importante visit. You are welcome to my blog
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Interesting work! Certainly why do slippers squeeze us? Nothing forced is good. Regards
That's true nothing forced Is good. i think everyone in this World have our own place and it all depend of you if you work for your dreams, if you Love youfself AND other people without jealosy. Thank you for your visit AND
Your regards @nancybriti1
Maravilloso!
Gracias @danigada 18 por tomar un tiempo para leer mi maravilloso poema como lo tú lo calificas. Eso nos anima a seguir adelante y tratar de hacerlo mejor cada día. Saludos y bendiciones para ti