Your poem is a powerful and moving exploration of the impact of jealousy. I appreciate your willingness to put yourself in the shoes of someone you don't understand, and I think you did a good job of capturing the pain and insecurity that can come from feeling jealous.
The poem's imagery is vivid and evocative, and I particularly like the lines about the "sourness in the mouth" and the "high-heeled shoes" that "squeeze in the heart." These images help to convey the sense of bitterness and constriction that jealousy can cause.
I also think the poem's ending is very strong. The question "Where do your shoes pinch you?" is a powerful way to invite the reader to reflect on their own experiences with jealousy.
Overall, I think this is a well-written and insightful poem that will resonate with many readers.
That's true @davidbright, jealous can cause bitterness and constriction feelings in some lnsecurity persons. I often try yo put myself in the shoes of someone I don't understand because I know about jealous by my own experience and they cause pain un our heart very much
i try to be careful about jealous. Thank you very much for your wonderful analysis of my poem
I am glad I was able to get the message you were trying to pass across. This shows that you did so well with it. Keep writing.
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Thank you again @davidbright. Of course I wiil continúe writing, I love and enjoy that too much