Coromoto.
If only I were just dreaming
I'll wrap all around my fingers
Having again that coast life
The tides like wild buses, giving and taking
The sound, sweet like a piano in perfect tune
I sleep, with the hope of drowning in those waters,
Of becoming one.
If I am alive, I'm fighting all my thoughts today
To not feel like walking out the door
To fool me back to reality, to my choices
Longing is a burden but is also flames to gasoline
With the feeling, it's gonna be colder one day
Wired on my lessons, and seeking grace
To pull away and raise you, me
I do, know that you would crawl back the hills to meet me
Our missing is determination, strength
If I could meet you, in my dreams
By the docks, sweet mother.
This poem was written by me today while traveling to my job. I was thinking about my mother and how much I miss her and my homeland, and those waters.
I hope everybody is doing great, I send you regards and positive energy.
César.
Estar lejos de quienes amamos es morir un poco cada día... te escribo en Castellano porque es tu idioma materno, el que aprendiste de tu madre, quien de seguro te extrañará tanto o más que tú. Espero que vuelvas a verla pronto. Este poema es precioso. Un abrazo.
Gracias @sirenahippie por tus bonitas palabras y deseos. Ciertamente la sensación de extrañar a alguien tan preciado no duele menos con el tiempo.
Te mando un abrazo fuerte y la mejor energía como la que proyectas siempre, un saludo.
Lovely poem cesarj21
It captures that feeling of yearning. At first I thought it was for only a place, but as the poem unfolded it became clear that it a yearning for both place and person. Like remembering home when you're far away. It is a bitter/sweet feeling.
I particularly liked the imagery in this line.
All the best César.
Thank you for all the kindness and feedback. What I mean by those words is precisely that, the bitterness of wanting to be with my mother again has served as fuel to keep going every day. I hope that you also have the opportunity to travel a bit in winter to a sunnier place to escape the cold and the grey for a while.
¡Regards!
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Cool. God bless our mothers and everything loving to us
only the best pray for your mother. nice to meet you
Thank you very much! Nice to meet you too, friend.
Que Gran Poema, A beautiful poem and dedicated to the first love, I hope you can see her again soon, have faith.
Muchas gracias por tomarte el tiempo de leer el poema y por tus palabras José. Espero que así sea., un saludo.
Oh this is so lovely. Poetry is so good at capturing love and longing.