Your poem carries a softness that grows into strength. I felt the ache of disappointment, yet also the resolve that shines through when you say, “I choose peace.” That choice turns pain into power, and it’s beautiful to read. The contrast between fake love and the genuine calm you long for feels very real and relatable. It’s a reminder that peace is often the greater gift we can give ourselves when love fails. A heartfelt and inspiring piece.
It's a life experience which I spilled out and in a form of metaphor,
Thanks dear.