this world is all there is?
Our being
a fragment
in eternity
for all
of forever
Our one chance to shine
our
one chance life
so
precious
Delicate,
like soft
summer rain
and precarious
as hope
Wondrous as the stars
that birthed the stuff
we are
How glorious
are we?
How majestic
all we see?
While
so many
aspire grandly
against the beauty
we can be
Utter, utter, utter, utter(!) thanks to @ryivhnn for the awesome Wombats in my footer!
Thank you to NASA for the use of this image. Science rocks!
May all beings be happy!
Yay! 🤗
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I love your poem. The structure of the words relate an internal reflection from the being and the universe that surrounds it, maintaining a division between the spiritual awakening and the prose of poetry. Thank you so much for sharing it
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts! I'm glad you like it!
Great poem. Nice words also. I love it
Thanks!
Simple y presto para una discusión saludable de sus ideas. La vida y la inmensidad del espacio siempre despiertan preguntas profundas.
Profound ideas - thanks! It can be a bit of a trap playing in the space of profundity. Easy to seem either shallow or a bit of a prat. Hopefully it worked for you.
That's right, how much beauty and mystery exists in the universe. Looking at these celestial bodies is wonderful, there arise thousands of questions and reflections, an excellent source of inspiration. Greetings.
Very nice poem, this paragraph catches my attention:
We must enjoy our only chance to live since we are the protagonists of it, a hug.
Yes - a reminder to myself, if no one else!