hamsterpoweriii cross-posted this post in Blockchain Poets 5 years ago


Veränderung

in Deutsch D-A-CH5 years ago (edited)

Was seh ich hier,
was ist denn da?
Einmal summt ein Tier,
einmal ist es unsichtbar.

Die Zeiten sind besonders,
die Welt scheint Kopf zu steh'n.
It's time for some wonders,
wir werden weiter geh'n.

Im Virtuellen ist es HIVE,
im Echten Zwölfe minus five.
Der Corona wird bezwungen,
die Chain jedoch besungen.


P.S. Mein Plan ist es im März noch auf Steem und Hive zu schreiben, danach habe ich hoffentlich einen besseren Plan 😉
Hoffe die zwei, drei "Doppel-"Beiträge werden mir verziehen :)

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@hamsterpoweriii, Thank you for sharing your piece. While I do not speak very much German, I do know enough about the language to pick up on the rhythm of the piece, which I found enjoyable. I also felt that the switching of rhyme scheme in the final verse kind of helped to create a metaphor of "Change".

These are certainly interesting times we live in both in real life and on the chain. We will live on in both instances. Thanks again for sharing.

I also felt that the switching of rhyme scheme in the final verse kind of helped to create a metaphor of "Change".

🤓 was unintentional ^^
Ty for your reply.

You're welcome! I always say, you get from art what you bring to it.

Please consider commenting on a couple of other poems in this community.

I will, once there are some more ^^

Awesome! I'm working on it.