@hamsterpoweriii, Thank you for sharing your piece. While I do not speak very much German, I do know enough about the language to pick up on the rhythm of the piece, which I found enjoyable. I also felt that the switching of rhyme scheme in the final verse kind of helped to create a metaphor of "Change".
These are certainly interesting times we live in both in real life and on the chain. We will live on in both instances. Thanks again for sharing.
🤓 was unintentional ^^
Ty for your reply.
You're welcome! I always say, you get from art what you bring to it.
Please consider commenting on a couple of other poems in this community.
I will, once there are some more ^^
Awesome! I'm working on it.